Pleas Help Me Correct My English?
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 31, 2010 in Eye tracking and tagged code, tracking
I am writing something on my website but I am not sure if my words are correct…
What is realtimevisits?
realtimevisits is the easiest tool to use for online tracking that creates a “bird’s eye view” of every website visitor and the pages they are browsing in real-time. You can watch in real-time as the visitor moves through your site’s pages.
Unlike other online tracking tools, realtimevisits is designed for the public therefore anyone can use it anywhere using no restricted codes or scripts that some other websites may not allow. It’s not complicated, no technical knowledge and software installation required.
realtimevisits is simply a matter of copy and pasting a one-line tracking code in your existing web pages. The code can be created in seconds when you log in your account.
A single tracking code is so powerful enough to track unlimited number of web pages and you can even use it without expiration. There is no subscription or membership charges to use realtimevisits.
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7 Comment(s)
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
“code is so powerful enough to track”
Remove the “so” from that sentence and then i think your good.
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
realtimevisits must be some kind of service or tool.
I think other than the thing the other guy said you are all OK.
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
for the public, therefore…
access it anywhere, using neither the restricted codes, nor scripts…
It’s straightforward, requiring no technical…
is powerful enough
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
Realtimevisits is the easiest tool to use for on line tracking creating a “bird’s eye view” of every website visitor and the pages they are browsing in real-time. You can watch in real-time as the visitor moves through your site’s pages.
Unlike other on line tracking tools, Realtimevisits is designed for the public, therefore anyone can use it anywhere using no restricted codes or scripts that some other websites may not allow. It’s not complicated, it requires no technical knowledge, and no software installation is required.
Realtimevisits is simply a matter of copying and pasting an one-line tracking code into your existing web pages. The code can be created in seconds when you log into your account.
A single tracking code is powerful enough to track an unlimited number of web pages, and you can even use it without expiration. There are no subscription or membership charges required to use Realtimevisits.
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
I would make the following changes (I did A-Level English Lit and A-Level English Lang and I’m a natural English speaker):
What is Realtimevisits?
Realtimevisits is the easiest tool to use for online tracking, to create a “bird’s eye view” of every website visitor as well as the pages they are browsing, all in real-time; watch in real-time as the visitor moves through your site’s pages!
Unlike other online tracking tools, Realtimevisits is designed for the public; therefore anyone can use it anywhere, using no restricted codes or scripts that other websites may not allow. It’s not complicated, and no technical knowledge or software installation is required.
Realtimevisits is simply a matter of copy and pasting a one-line tracking code into your existing web pages. The code can be created in seconds when you log in to your account.
A single tracking code is powerful enough to track an unlimited number of web pages, plus it comes with unlimited use – there are no subscription or membership charges to use Realtimevisits.
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
RealTimeVisits is a tool used for online tracking of Web page usage. RealTimeVisits creates a “bird’s eye view” of each website visitor and their page navigation history in real-time. It’s simplicity and ease of use allow the site operator to monitor in real-time as the visitor navigates a site’s pages.
Unlike other online tracking tools, RealTimeVisits is designed for use by the general public. Anyone with basic computer skills can use it with little or no specialized training. It can be used remotely and uses restricted code or scripts that may not be permitted by some websites. No software installation is required.
RealTimeVisits is enabled by pasting a one-line tracking code on existing web pages. This code can be created in seconds when logging into your account.
This single tracking code is powerful enough to track an unlimited number of web pages and can be used without expiration. There are no subscription or membership charges to use RealTimeVisits.
By Nick Kurentz on Jan 21, 2010 | Reply
“A single tracking code is so powerful enough to track…”
If you either remove the “so” or change “enough to” to “it can”, then I think it would be easier to understand.
“Unlike other online tracking tools, realtimevisits is designed for the public therefore anyone can use it anywhere using no restricted codes or scripts that some other websites may not allow”
Also, if I’m going to be really picky, then you could change the “that” to a “which” in the second paragraph, but you don’t have to do that.